This is a true story of how a woman fails out of love and ruined her life. The story is very touching and she wants to share her ugly experience with other women. You are going to make the story come alive by using the bulleted points.
EARLY STAGE IN MY MARRIAGE
1. I, Mrs. Idika hail from Africa.
2. Got married 18 years ago to a wonderful man.
3. My husband sponsored me to America.
4. Worked two jobs to pay for my medical school
5. Was unable to further his education because of heavy loads on his shoulders
6. I have 2 grown up kids, one boy and one girl 16 and 15 years olds
7. My husband took care of the whole family while I was a student
8. He never complained.
9. We did everything together, he loved me and I worshipped him
10. I prepare hot food and a cold glass of milk or juice every time.
11. I scratch his head and back as that helps him to relax after hard days work.
12. He was what I was looking for in a man
13. Very handsome and very kind
14. He took care of my parents and also his parents
15. He made me a queen
16. He started his second job from the first to my final year in medical school
17. He made 15 dollars on one job and 10 dollars on the second job
18. He paid all the bills and bought me whatever we can afford
19. We had a joint account and my name was on his credit card to enable me buy things that I need.
AFTER GRADUATION
1. I got a well paying job
2. Things were really looking very good for the family
3. He was the happiest man alive that his beautiful wife is now a medical doctor
4. He continued with the two jobs, one pay was for the family and the other was for his mansion in Africa.
PARTIES AND BAD FRIENDS
1. I Started hanging out with my collages at work, most of them are divorcees
2. They run their own bank accounts that their husbands does not know about
3. They have secret boy friends here and there…which I detested
4. My husband warned me to stay away from those divorcees, I relayed the news to one of the divorcees and all hail were let loose.
5. I continued to hang out with them and started doing some of the bad things they were doing, like not going home after work. Opened a bank account with the
knowledge of my husband. Not cooking for the family as I used to. Does my laundry and let him do his. The sex was not there anymore, I was not cheating on him but I
had lots of male friends in my profession.
6. I told him to go back to school and he flipped. I told him that I do not feel very good that he is a warehouse worker. The house was on fire, he said he paid all
the bills and put me through medical school from a warehouse pay. He felt very disrespected and humiliated. I left the house and slept with my girlfriend for the first
time in my relationship.
HE LOST BOTH HIS JOBS
1. His heart was broken and he got fired from his jobs for not concentrating at work
2. I apologized for my actions, he accepted but it was never the same from then on
3. Our everyday loving making turned to once a week and sometimes nothing in weeks.
4. Most times I would not partake in the sexual activities, he will do his thing and sleep. He was never happy.
THE BILLS
1. I am now the bread winner of the family and I was paying all the bills
2. Anytime my kids asks for something, I would snap at them, telling them that I pay all the bills while their father seats on the couch all the day and night doing
nothing.
3. I only buy the cheapest thing to cook for him. I do not give him the hot meals and cold glass of milk and orange juice any more. I complained about everything.
THE END TIME
1. He was not talking to me very much. He will only speak when spoken to,
2. The sex was at its low point, no hugs, no kisses, no affection of any kind
3. He never questioned anything that I do or where I went.
4. I was too stubborn and too arrogant to say sorry for my bad behaviors
5. He traveled to Africa for a visit. After a month, he did not come back and never called. I tried to reach him but never got through. My parents called me and
asked me what the matter was; I had nothing to tell them. My parents disowned me for treating my husband they way I did. I went to Africa after three months to see
what was going on, but I was not allowed to get into his mansion. I was treated like an outcast. I never saw my husband again; he is now remarried with 2 kids. My kids
are now living in Africa with him and his new family. My life is a mess, I tried to date one or two people in my profession but none of them equaled my husband. One of
them even slapped me and pushed me out of his home after he slept with me. All my friends left me, and they would go to my husband any time they visit Africa and one
of them has asked him to marry her.
Bring this story alive and it’s worth 50%. It has to be creative, stylish. Make it a three-page story. Let the reader know that you can not eat your cake and have it
back.
