Is Pop Culture Good For You?
and Other Questions for the Millennial Generation. And my topic is how the American movies affect the Indian society. i did the draft and she didn’t seem to be very happy with the work i did, so please help me.
the teacher put her inputs on the essay im going to attach.
these are the final comments the teacher put:
Your research covers the elements for a cogent and important discussion of the influence of American film industry on Indian society, but your essay fails to move beyond vague references to the major claims in your sources. I’d like to see a revision of the ideas here to lead with your own major claims, and use the sources from your research to support your discussion. Further, I need to see details to substantiate the claims you are making.
